Final Music cover:

• I changed the header line to "Leading music magazine prepared to be blunt and a little bit..." because I thought it was more fitting to the magazine and it worked with the title to create a catchy slogan "Prepared to be blunt and a little bit boulder".
• I wrote the tag lines beneath the featured band names to draw buyers interest and inform them of the bands that they can read about.
• By adding the red line to separate the "Free poster" and "Win gig tickets" lines it makes it clearer to readers that it doesn't mean "Answer one simple question and win free poster inside"
• On InDesign "Win gig tickets" appears closer to the line below it.
• "In the Bushes" is the main feature band and the name clearly relates to the main image. The main image also is very fitting to the magazine name "Boulder" and his shirt matches the colour scheme. The image is enticing to draw in buyers and so is the preview of the free poster.
• I also have changed the price of the Magazine to make it more affordable to my target audience.